Time heals Time mends Mends a broken heart Mends all shattered dreams Dreams are wild Dreams can come true True commitment serves True intentions do win Win we all must Win we have to To live is to toil To survive is to fall Fall to rise up again Fall to attain Attain sense of worth Attain self respect Respect is irrefutably earned Respect is a choice Choice is exhilarating Choice is always yours Yours to dwell Yours to implement Implement purpose Implement fortitude Fortitude to survive Fortitude to overcome Overcome your fears Overcome all nay sayers Nay sayers don't matter Nay sayers will sooner or later bite the dust Dust your hesitations Dust all spiritual darkness Darkness must dwindle Darkness will never arise Arise yourself instead Arise your subliminal vision Vision to achieve Vision to seize the day Day breaks with inspiration Day begins with positivism Positivism rules over everything Positivism reigns supreme Supreme mindfulness Supreme allegiance Allegiance to your true self Allegiance to the ruling moments Moments make memories Moments don't last forever Forever.. Memories..
This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
DAY 16 prompt is – FATHER TIME.
Free write about how you feel about time. Do you have clocks in every room? Do you find your time valuable or do you give it away to everyone else but yourself?
Poetry Form – BLITZ POETRY.
The Blitz Poem, a poetry form created by Robert Keim. This form of poetry is a stream of short phrases and images with repetition and rapid flow.
Begin with one short phrase, it can be a cliché. Begin the next line with another phrase that begins with the same first word as line 1. The first 48 lines should be short, but at least two words.
The third and fourth lines are phrases that begin with the last word of the 2nd phrase, the 5th and 6th lines begin with the last word of the 4th line, and so on, continuing, with each subsequent pair beginning with the last word of the line above them, which establishes a pattern of repetition. Continue for 48 total lines with this pattern, And then the last two lines repeat the last word of line 48, then the last word of line 47.
The title must be only three words, with some sort of preposition or conjunction joining the first word from the third line to the first word from the 47th line, in that order.
There should be no punctuation. When reading a BLITZ, it is read very quickly, pausing only to breathe.
PS – You may read my previous OCTPOWriMo entries at – 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20.
Happy reading y’all!
Love,
58 Comments
This is deep on so many levels I don’t even know where to begin my comment. It is filled with brilliant truths from start to finish. Bravo
Thank you so much for such a beautiful comment.. Means a lot!❤️
An abundance of beautifully crafted, uplifting messages in this, Rich! Love it!
Thank you so much!❤️
Always my pleasure, Richa!
So true!
Indeed! 🙂
Lovely
Thank you so much!❤️
This is awesome, dearest! ❤️
Thank you so much Winnie dear!❤️
My pleasure, dearest! ❤️
Hello, Richa! I wish to heavens you had a reblog button. This piece was spectacular!!! I so enjoyed reading this and I love how it touched on just being. Being oneself. Loved this!!! 💖
Aww.. Thank you so much.. Means a lot Beckie!
Sadly self hosted blogs don’t have a re-blog tab on WP.. But you can always copy-paste and post it on your site! 😉
Oh, I know I could copy and paste, but I only do that with permission of the blogger with whom has written a piece.
Now that I have your permission, LOL! I’m going o do that right now! Thank you, Sweety!!! 💖
Hahaha.. You don’t ever need my permission Beckie! I know your intentions are as pure as you!❤❤
You are so sweet, Richa! Thank you. Again… It’s one thing when there is a reblog. If there isn’t, I do ask permission out of repsect to the writer. 😘
And so are you!❤❤
(Yes.. I understand)😘😘
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Very beautiful.
Thank you so much!❤️
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As usual, very creative and thought provoking. Cheers 🙂
Glad you like it.. Thank you so much!❤️
Such a lovely post💕
Thank you so much!❤️
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Hey there love, how have you been ? I hope that all is well ❤️
” Darkness will never arise” that right there deserves a standing ovation. There’s a lot of powerful inspiring energy all over this… what a stunning write Richa ❤️
How did you know that I was stalking your blog yesterday!! Ah, this is what #cosmicConnection feels like! 😉
All well this side babe! How have you been?
Miss you!❤❤
Yep definitely, I sensed your presence there 😉
I’m doing well, I’ve missed you so much too ❤️❤️ I think I’ll be blogging regularly starting from this week..
Ps.. I’m psychic too 🤫😉
Oh wow!!!!! Tell me something about myself, please!🙏🙏
PS – It’s good to have you back!❤❤
😊 Aww Richa you are one beautiful Angel who brings forth so much love light, happiness and inspiration and you deserve the world and so much more.
I’m glad to be back ❤️❤️
You are the BEST and the SWEETEST!!!!!❤️❤️
Aww 😊😊 you are way to kind ❤️
Lovely!
Thank you so much!❤️
You’re very welcome!
How beautiful!
Thank you so much!💜
So beautifully crafted ….❤️❤️
Thank you so much Sakshi!❤️
My pleasure
My pleasure 😊
I just love the rollicking style of this, combined with how profound the words and ideas are <3
Glad you like it.. Thank you so much!❤️
A great play of words!!
Thank you so much!❤️
My pleasure, Richa!!
This is so cool and creative. Well scribed, hehe
Thank you so much!
Actually… My improvised break dance alleviates a broken heart.
I offered to pay for a third of my cup of coffee in improvised jazz dance the other day and Melbourne hipsters for all their colorful ink just can’t seem to smile. Maybe when I don’t buy coffee for homeless souls I might get my own Wiley E Coyote tattoo one day.
In the meantime I just have to staple my passport to my forehead and go walking around the airport every few months.
No sleep til the bloody cat stops dancing
Really beautifully penned Richa 🙂
Now on an off the wall way – romantically so to speak – l have just tagged you for Scene Cuts – topic – Romcoms 🙂
https://aguycalledbloke.blog/2019/10/20/scene-cuts-series-1-game-3-romcom/
Thank you so much Rory! Sure, will do!❤️
Superb 🙂
Gorgeous poem. Deeply inspiring.
Glad you like it.. Thank you so much!❤️
Very powerful piece!! Omg, I wanted to do that Nanowrimo poetry-month when I read it…💕💕
next time! 🤨
Yes, these is always the next time! 😉
PS – I’m terribly lagging behind on this one this year! Phew! 😛 😛