They said I couldn't do it, that I did not have it in me. Stripping me of my free-will, denying me any courtesy. Doubting my every advance, they thought that I was prodigal. Underestimating my will-power, they mistook me for a non-radical. Rebuffing my desire to excel, they laughed at my ambitious aspirations. Believing in my certain failure, they mocked at my pristine prominence. Opposing my every insightful debate, they belittled my confidence. Rejecting all my appeals for a better life, they tried-and-tested my tolerance. "Rising like a phoenix from the ashes," I yet out-lasted and out-wore every impediment. Contradicting this perfidious-treacherous world, I survived, I excelled, I am self-sufficient. No denial, no disapproval, no refutation can ever bring me down, Traversing all the high and lows, combating life's endeavors and conflicts, proudly I wear my crown!
This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
DAY 22 prompt is – BROKEN PIECES.
Sometimes the only way to really experience something is to smash it apart and examine all the broken pieces. Sometimes perfection is not as truthful as imperfection. Sometimes it’s necessary to tear apart that which we hold dear to discover its true power. We’ve all had transitions in life, moving from one phase to another. These times can be filled with beauty and pain or both.
But what if it’s more than that? How many of us have felt broken – mentally, physically, spiritually? Our stories live in the journey back with all the broken pieces in tow. Share yours. Let’s inspire one another.
Poetry Form – FREE VERSE.
Let nothing/no one STOP you!
PS – You may read my previous OCTPOWriMo entries at – 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19, 20, 21, 22, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31.
Happy reading y’all!
Love,
47 Comments
I’m not exactly sure why, but this poem made the tears run down my cheeks!! Thank you! Sometimes we need that.
I’m so glad that it resonated with you! Yes, sometimes we need just that!❤️
What a powerful message. You captured it beautifully.
Glad you like it.. Thank you so much!❤️
You are welcome
YES!
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Brava. The rising phoenix is an excellent image.
Thank you so much!❤️
I like the transformation from broken to proudly wearing her crown!
Means a lot coming from you! Thank YOU!❤️
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really enjoyed reading your poem…..by the end I wanted to shout out “you go girl!”
Thank YOU!❤️
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Brilliant my dear. Absolutely brilliant! 😘💕
So glad to see you here! Thank you so much!❤️
I’m always here! 😬💕💕
Beautiful ❤️
Thank you so much!❤️
Your welcome❤️
Amazing insights. Thank you!
Thank you so much!❤️
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Great poem of empowerment and self-determination, Richa.
Thanks love!❤️
You are welcome!
Very nice. I can relate.
Thank you so much!❤️
Who are they… let them see your crown! 👑 Well said!
Ain’t you the BEST! Thank you so much!❤️
My pleasure!
Wow! Awesome!
Thank you so much!❤️
A beautiful piece, dear Richa! ❤️ This resonated with me.
Thank you so much Winnie.. I’m so glad that you like it!!❤️
So inspirational…very well written
Thank you so much!❤️
Wow, it gives some fire inside. Thank you
Glad that it resonated.. Thank you so much sweetie!❤️
Not that I am surprised, but this poem was so beautiful and powerful! This was so well written and I thank you so much for sharing. Your writing abilities are brilliant and just amazing!
This means a lot! Thank you so much!❤️
You are more than welcome!!!
We shall wear those crowns like the queens and kings that we are, I absolutely love this.
Ps, If I could I’d do a backflip for this cause it’s just so right and perfect but I think it’s best not to hurt myself right before the dec hols 😅
We SURELY shall! 😉
Thank you so much sweetie!❤️
You’re welcome love ❤️
Gutsy, from that line ‘They say …’ well watch out!