If we could buy love, I would pick me up a bright pink one, The one with frills, meshes and laces, And a hint of shimmering-sunny ribbons. I would forever carry that love in my heart, For precious to me it will be, No, I would not, never trade it, On him I'll never cheat. Flaunting my peachy love around, I will bask in the righteous glory of pride, Wearing my love on my sleeves, I promise, I'll do him good till I die. Such love is complicated to find, No stores in stock have it any more, No burgundies, no maroons will my heart mend, Only the pink ones have my cure. If you happen to find my "pink" love, Will you keep it safe for me? Tell him that I loved him, I am sorry, together we couldn't be!
This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
Day 27 word prompt is “WHAT COLOR IS IT?”
Suggested Form – Select a random noun. When you see an image of this person/place/thing, what color is it? Brainstorm the different ways the color can be described. Write a poem to help us see something in color through your eyes.
Keeping in mind the “festivities” that are over burdening my creativity and taking a toll on my mental health – here’s one of my old poems that I’d written sometime back. Since it perfectly fits in with the requirements of the prompt and the theme, I couldn’t stop myself from posting this yet again!
As always any feedback and advise is more than appreciated!
Love,
68 Comments
stunning and your Pink Love is real for him !!
Aww.. Thank you so much!❤
You are welcome. I hope he finds this real as well Richa !!
What a wonderful title and imagery. It’s like the opposite of blue.
Haha.. Ain’t it! 😉
Thank you so much for reading!❤
Amazing and beautiful. 😊💟
Thank you sweetheart!❤
You’re welcome and I hope you had a great weekend! 😊💟
Life’s been really busy this side – Esp with festivals and guests! Thanks for asking sweetie!❤
Hope yours was better than mine? 😉
Its been kinda hectic with school and work plus midterms is around the corner. 💟
Aww.. Wish you all the best!😃👍
Thank you so much! 😊
Beautiful❤😊
Thank you so much!❤
You are welcome 😊
This is absolutely beautiful!! 😊💗
Thank you so much!❤
i’ll be on the look out fro your pink love – this is unbelievably sweet and touching
Aww.. How sweet! Thank you so much Gina!❤
Take care of yourself, dear! ❤️
Aww.. Thank you so much for your concern sweetheart.. I’m a little better now!❤
Btw.. How did your “karwa-chauth” go? 😉
Glad you are feeling little better, take care..🤗
Haha.. I think I need to ask this to my husband 😉 I can’t stay hungry 😄..How about you?
Haha.. I kept the fast.. No water, no food plus the moon came out at 9:30 (thanks to the cloud cover!)😁😁
Thanks for your support sweetheart!❤️
Aww.. such a lovely and sweet gesture! My poor husband..that day it was raining here so no moon!! 😔
Always! ❤️
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I love the metaphor! Nicely done.
Thank you so much Aixa!❤
This is beautiful Richa, I love the Victorian flare of it!😊 ❤️
I’m so glad you do.. Thank you so much for reading Jenna!❤
It’s my pleasure!😊 ❤️
Definitely good one to post again, as I missed your first one. xx 💋
Aww.. Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
A beautiful pink kind of love! 😊 Beautifully written!
Thank you so much for reading!❤
Always a pleasure!
I’m smitten by this lovely piece,
So pink and so sweet 💗 ah perfect ☺️
Aww.. Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
You’re welcome love ❤️
Superb, at your best 😊
Thank you so much!❤
This is such a pleasure to read👍🏻👌🏻
Thank you so much!❤
😍😍😘😘
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Love…in a very girly shade!
Hahaha.. You understood it right! #aGirlWantsWhatSheWants 😉
Thank you so much for stopping by!❤
Awww! This is so sweet. Pink wala love!💕
Hahaha.. Exactly! 😉
Thank you so much for stopping by!❤
You are so welcome Richa! 😀💕
Beautifully penned!
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
You are an awesome thinker and excellent writer
Whoa, what a compliment! Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
I like this, even from the archives. Stands the time test
This means a lot.. Thank you so much!❤
This touched me Richa, beautiful!
Aww.. Glad you liked it.. Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
So beautiful read…on point as always !
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
How adorable!! I hope you find it! 😘😁
Aww.. Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
Beautiful lines and this ‘pink love’ sounds so real
Thank you so much!❤
Oh I so love this. This is beyond beautiful ❤️
Means a lot! Thank you so much!❤️
This is adorable. It reminds me that, when Penny died, I used her pink digital camera for eleven months, until our son bought me a more “masculine” model and I gave the pink one to the granddaughter of Penny’s best female friend. (I was her best friend, overall.)
Mesmerizing, lovely and beautiful. Great writing indeed. 👏👏👏👍
Thank you so much! 🙂