Flames come together, Only to part, yet again. Someone is a cheat!
Inspired by one of the most talented blogger on WordPress, Megha’s World – here’s my first ever attempt at Haiku! Would love to hear about any feedback on this endeavor of mine. I hope I did my 5-7-5 right?
Love,
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Tat’s petty good, I think you got the 5 7 5 right but it’s good anyway 🙂
Thank you so much!😊
You’re always welcome 🙂
Simple truth!
I agree! Love is a privilege!
Great 👌
Thanks love!❤
Most welcome 😊
That’s wonderful, dear! You did great as always! ❤️
Aww.. Thanks love! You always say the right things!❤
It’s my pleasure, dear! ❤️
Truth be told😊
Hahaha.. Exactly! 😉
Wonderful first Haiku!😊 ❤️….I’ve done a few in the past, but I tend to be an individual with too many words for the style to work well for me.😜 But it is always a fun challenge on occasion.🙃😆
Aww.. Thanks love!❤️
Hahahaha.. I agree! For “wordsmiths” like us it’s a little difficult to stop at just 17 syllables! LOL! 😉
Tried it as a part of challenging myself and for learning something new! Keeping my grey cells alive! Hehe.. 😊
Yes definitely, sometimes it’s a fun adventure to shake things up and try something new.😉😁❤️
I absolutely agree!😜😜
Very nice one. Hope it’s not feom your personal life.
Haha.. Thankfully not! 😉
Thanks much!❤
Hey, Richa! I think you really hit the essence of the dilemma with the fire analogy here. Very serious subject–one none of us want to experience, but I imagine it does “burn like fire”!
It sure does!🔥
I am so glad you liked my attempt. Thank you so much!❤️
Awesome.Thanks for such an introduction…”Most talented blogger”..haha..I think this is your love for me speaking..
Hahahaha.. “Is payar ko kaya naam doon!”😜
On a serious note – You really are an amazing writer Megha and I totally love, love and love each word that you weave!🙋
Thank you so much for your inspiration! You indeed are a rockstar!❤️
“Bloggers Mutual admiration club.”..haha.
Thanks so much dear for such kind words.The feeling is absolutely mutual.
“Bloggers Mutual Admiration Club” it is!❤️
Yay!!
Good one!
Thanks much!😊
That’s awesome, Richa.. you nailed it! ❤️
Thanks sweetheart!❤
Btw.. Love your new DP! It’s gorgeous! 😉
My pleasure Always! ❤️
Thank you so much dear ❤️🤗
Straight to the point Richa 🌟
Hehe.. Absolutely! 😉
💖 clever and witty. xx 💋
Thanks sweetheart!❤️
short and succinct. Has me wondering … who is the cheat? good job!
Haha.. Someone for sure is! 😉
Thanks a bunch!❤
Excellent haiku. ❤️
Thank you so much!❤
I can hardly believe this was your first attempt at a haiku! This was beautiful!! You did an amazing job just like you always do!!
Aww.. How sweet! Thanks a bunch for your encouragement sweetie!❤
You are more than welcome sweetie!!!
❤❤❤❤
Nicely done!!
Thank you so much!❤
Wonderful haiku!
Glad you like it. Thank you so much!❤
Aw!!! Great
Liked your haiku
It’s not your first attempt it’s your best attempt
Aww.. How kind! Thanks sweetie!❤
Amazing !!
Thank you so much!❤
My pleasure 🙃
Beautiful ❤
Thanks much!❤️
Awesome! Keep blogging in haiku form, cheers!
Thanks much! 🙂
Wow your haiku is brilliant ❤️
I am so glad! Thanks love!❤️
It’s my pleasure ❤️
Wow, (yet again), this one’s fierce! Love it!!
Thank you so much! Means a lot!❤
i think you did well!
Thank you so much!❤
Oh my how beautiful ❤️❤️
Thank you so much!❤
My pleasure ❤️