POETRY

Sweet Surrender

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This post is in response to “Tuesday Writing Prompt Challenge July 24, 2018” by GO DOG GO CAFÉ. My first ever!

The prompt is – “melt, drip, savor” and the idea is to use these 3 words in same order, in a piece of poetry or prose. This poem of mine is an attempt to bring to light the “sweet surrender” that two lovers experience, passionately and lovingly, overlooking the inhibitions! (Yet again, my first attempt to write something on these lines!)

The prompts are designed to be quick challenges that can be written in 10 to 15 minutes, are fun, and gets everyone interacting! Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!

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    1. Aww.. Thanks sweetie!❤️

      Trying my hands on different things – though tbh, this is not my forte! I am glad this piece made any sense! Lol.. 😉

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  13. This post really makes me want to melt in the arms of my lover. The ink in these words drip so deep that I wants to savour more of my love.

    Really a good poem to savour with each drip of cream as the ice melts.

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      1. Thanks for the opportunity. Want to submit some of my poems to competitions and open for writers workshops, residency etc

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        1. That’s nice! There are a lot of options available on WP for tags and competitions – Check “reader” and I am sure you’ll find something worthwhile for yourself! Good luck! 🙂

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  15. This is exactly what I had in mind when I posted the prompt. This drips sexiness and passion. Excellent job with the rhyme also. I am so glad you participated. Hope to see you again!

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