Desiring your consideration, I have cried a million tears. "Invisible" to your complacency, I have died a million deaths. Inconspicuous indulgence! Your nearsightedness annihilates me, I can no longer take this any more. I wonder how can you be so unseeing, and my love be so obscure?
This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
DAY 9 prompt is – SEE/SEEING.
Do you always believe what you see? Do you view the world through rose-colored glasses? It’s a matter of perspective. For today’s prompt, think about viewing things in a different way. Help us to see what you see and use your words to paint a vivid image.
Poetry Form – FREE VERSE.
What I see is being “unseen” and it hurts!
PS – You may read my previous OCTPOWriMo entries at – 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10.
Happy reading y’all!
Love,
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So very true. Unrequited love is the worst. Great writing!
It is indeed! Thank you so much!🙏
wow. . . really good!
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interesting 💕
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True💕
Sadly yes!🙏
very well done…….i love how much emotion you put into your words.
Glad you like it.. Thank you so much!🙏
I really did! 🙂
The worst ’emotion’ of all to encounter: indifference.
So true!🙏🙏
As they say ” Indifference” is the best revenge in a relationship.
Absolutely true Megha!🙏
Really beautiful.
Thank you so much!🙏
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Indifference can be just as harmful as abuse.
Sadly yes! 🙁
Beautifully stated. ♥️ xx
Glad you like it.. Thank you so much!🙏
So beautiful!
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You are welcome, Richa!!
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Beautiful piece of writing!
Thank you so much!🙏
Heart-wrenching but beautifully penned, dearest! ❤️🌺
Glad you like it dear.. Thank you so much!🙏
You’re welcome, dearest! Love it! ❤️
Beautiful writing
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And still she hopes, a real love wrangle.
All we’ve got is HOPE! 🙏
Indeed 🙂
A-M-A-Z-I-N-G ❤
WELL DONE !
I LIKE IT A LOT
See ya soon
Gianmarco
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I felt your words . Such great writing.🙂
Thank you so much!🙏
Indifference… It makes me so sad and I hate it. Nicely written.