Your Cheating Heart – Haiku

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Flames come together,

Only to part, yet again.

Someone is a cheat!

Inspired by one of the most talented blogger on WordPress, Megha’s World – here’s my first ever attempt at Haiku! Would love to hear about any feedback on this endeavor of mine. I hope I did my 5-7-5 right?

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  1. Wonderful first Haiku!😊 ❤️….I’ve done a few in the past, but I tend to be an individual with too many words for the style to work well for me.😜 But it is always a fun challenge on occasion.🙃😆

    1. Aww.. Thanks love!❤️

      Hahahaha.. I agree! For “wordsmiths” like us it’s a little difficult to stop at just 17 syllables! LOL! 😉
      Tried it as a part of challenging myself and for learning something new! Keeping my grey cells alive! Hehe.. 😊

  2. Hey, Richa! I think you really hit the essence of the dilemma with the fire analogy here. Very serious subject–one none of us want to experience, but I imagine it does “burn like fire”!

    1. Hahahaha.. “Is payar ko kaya naam doon!”😜

      On a serious note – You really are an amazing writer Megha and I totally love, love and love each word that you weave!🙋
      Thank you so much for your inspiration! You indeed are a rockstar!❤️

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