"Once in 50 God-damn years!" Rob whispers, teary-eyed, staring at an old-crinkled photograph of him and his daughter, who had gone missing when she was just 5, only to be found dead later. With innumerable agonizing questions, untold doubts and infinite unbearable complains, he had waited for this day all his life; the day when the heavens subside and two worlds collide, of living and the dead. "Ah, here we are!" he exclaims, as he takes his final step towards the "portal to another dimension" hoping to embrace his little girl once again.
This post is written in response to Sonya’s Three Line Tales, Week #134 – where you write a “tale” in just 3 lines on the picture provided. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
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A poignant tale.
Heartbreaking for sure!
Thanks for reading!❤️
You’re welcome.
a wrinkle in time like tale – absolutely lovely story telling, you had me from the first line. I secretly wish for this moment too.
Aww.. Ikr! Me too!😍
I am so glad this post resonated with you!❤️
I love these Three Line Tales!
Thank you so much!❤️
The ending was filled with sorrow as well as happiness. Heartbreaking yet showcased the parental love. 😊
Keep up the good work Richa 🤗
Warm regards
Dee Kay
I am so glad that this resonated with you. Thank you so much for stopping by!❤️
It was my pleasure 😊
Ah, you leave us on the brink of knowing and needing faith. It creates a metaphor.
I tried! 😉
Glad you like it!❤️
I’m so moved by this tale !
Thanks love! Glad you like it!❤️
Heart-wrenching. You are a wordsmith, girl
Seems like it worked this time! Phew!!!!!🙋
Thanks for reaching out sweetie, really appreciate it!🙏
The problem seems to be recurrent. I tried posting a comment on a different blog and again it was refused.
This usually happens to me when I change my device that I am logging into WP with! I mean, WP behaves differently to my comments basis I am logged in through a lappy vs a phone! (Self diagnosis)
Okay
But yeah, you may raise a ticket with WP.. Hopefully, they’ll be able to give you an explanation and also a resolution.
Sure. Thanks (y)
Aww.. Thanks love! Glad you like it!❤️
This is beautiful 🙂
Thank you so much sweetie!❤️
Sad but very beautiful xx
Glad you like it! Thank you so much!❤️
Short and interesting,,
Thank you so much!❤️
This is heartwrenching, but so full of hope! ❤️
I love the “portal to another dimension” 3 line challenge for this week!😊
Glad you like it! Thank you so much!❤️
🙂 ❤️
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It must be torture to not only lose a child, but to live your whole life with unanswered questions…
Ikr.. The ironies of life!
Such a heartfelt story
Glad you like it! Thank you so much!❤️
My pleasure always 😊🌸
A well told tale, an enjoyable read.
Thank you so much, glad you liked it!
Pleasure
Being able to embrace the dearest soul in his life would be the sweetest feeling ever. There is no greater loss than a parent losing a child.
I agree with you – there is no other pain that compares to it.
Thanks for stopping by!❤️
This is awesome!
Glad you like it. Thanks for stopping by!❤️
💕 your creative writing is awesome!
Aww.. How kind! Thank you so much!❤️
Well-written! 🙂
Thank you so much! 🙂
Good write and image too
Thank you so much! 🙂
Nice blog 💐
Thanks much! 🙂
A truly heartbreaking tale, I do empathise with Rob.Losing a loved one is an immeasurable kind of pain but the ending gives hope that he may be reunited with his daughter.
This is brilliant pen work Richa❤️
Glad you liked it sweetie!❤️
I agree, it’s not easy to lose a loved one – especially when you are a parent.
Your work is always amazing love ❤️
I can only imagine how hard that must be.