When your life has been all about ups and downs, Worldly matter hitting you back to ground, With no respite in sight you see, Let go, roll over, let it be. "Surrender" yourself to the mystic law, Sometimes it's rudimental to ignore the materialistic flaw, Reminisce that your life is worth a zillion smiles, In His faith you must endearingly reconcile. Forgive the nay-sayers and dis-remember your pains, Free yourself from the ghastly caustic chains, Believe in the Supreme Power Of Love, Soar, surge, ascend, rise above!
This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
Day 1 word prompt is “SURRENDER!”
Suggested Form – Free Verse
PS – Participating for the first time in a “daily” event like this! Wish me luck!
Love,
75 Comments
The power of love beautifully written. 😊💓
Thank you so much sweetie!❤️
You’re welcome my dear Richa! 🤗💓
Magnificent article!
Thank you so much!❤️
Beautiful ❤️
Thank you so much sweetie!❤️
♥️ is everything! Living life in a space of love creates and attracts abundance. Beautiful post. xx
Thanks! You are so right sweetie!❤️
“I love you without knowing how, or when, or from where. I love you simply, without problems or pride: I love you in this way because I do not know any other way of loving but this, in which there is no I or you, so intimate that your hand upon my chest is my hand, so intimate that when I fall asleep your eyes close.”
― Pablo Neruda, 100 Love Sonnets
That just made my heart melt. Thank you 🙏🏼♥️💋
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Simply beautiful Richa! It took me back to a podcast I was listening to in my car this morning about letting more white space into our lives and then our closing in my yoga class tonight on surrendering. Your poem feels very much in the white space of letting go and filling your heart and soul with love and light. 🤗💓
Thanks sweetie.. I’m glad that this piece resonated with you!❤️
“Darkness cannot drive out darkness: only light can do that. Hate cannot drive out hate: only love can do that.”
― Martin Luther King Jr.
Yes, so very true!❤️ 😊
Love is noble and being so is the flame of life. Congratulations on the beautiful poetry.
You are so right! Love is all we have!❤️
Thank you so much for stopping by!
Such a beautiful poem!! ❤️
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
❤️🤗
well said 🙂
Thank you so much!❤
Wow such a beautiful words. I like that picture
Glad you do! Thanks sweetheart!❤️
Thats done so beautifully 💐💐
Thank you so much!❤️
Wow!! Love it! You should submit this one to be formally published
Aww.. Thank you so much! I so wish.. ❤️
Submit it and see 💖
Hmm.. Thank you so much for the encouragement. 🙏❤️
Lemme figure out how! 😉
Check your fav magazines to see if any pay for submissions ☺
Beautifully written
Thank you so much!❤️
Beautifully said!
Thank you so much!❤️
Definitely set a bar for yourself! 💕🙄😮😘
Oh my! Thank you so much, really appreciate it!❤️
Ok. I’ll let this one go, because I am excited to see how the next 30 go. 💕
Phew!!! #gameOn 😆😋😊💁🤗🤩
Utterly inspiring Richa! 💜
Thank you so much sweetie!❤️
You are such a talented writer Richa – this is a really amazing piece of work :O) x
Thank you so much.. This means a lot to me!❤️
You’re so welcome :O) x
Wonderfully romantic!
Indeed! Thank you so much!❤️
Hi Richa,
very wise post , I like it.We need to meet that mystic law, and when we do that, wonders will start to happen 🙂
Amen! 🙂
Thank you so much Ben, really appreciate it!❤️
Believe in the Supreme Power Of Love,
Soar, surge, ascend, rise above!……….such beautiful lines …… amazingly beautiful Richa
Aww.. Thank you so much sweetheart!❤️
Most welcome 😊
Oh Richa, this is mesmerising,,
Aww.. Thanks a bunch sweetie!❤
I surrender to the beauty of your words. I loved it, dear! ❤️
Aww.. Thanks a bunch sweetheart!❤
My pleasure, dear Richa! ❤️
I think you too should participate in this challenge Winnie, since you write so well!❤️
You might wanna check out the link – http://www.octpowrimo.com/
Awww! That’s so kind of you, dear! ❤️ I have already come across the challenge from another blogger. After weighing in, I don’t think I can post a poem daily. It’s because I’m now taking care of my mom. There are times I can’t concentrate because of her childlike manner. Anyway, thank you for believing in me. I appreciate it! ❤️🌹😘
Beautifully written 👍💕💕💕
Thank you so much!❤️
Awesome write dear🌹❤
Thank you so so much sweetie!❤️
You are welcome🌺
Wonderful 💐
Thanks much! 🙂
prolific and profoundness found in the power of love…well express
Thank you so much!❤
Very powerful, beautiful and motivating
“Forgive the nay-sayers and dis-remember your pains,” & there is so such freedom in forgiveness ❤️
Thank you so much for stopping by sweetie!🙏❤️
I am so glad that this piece resonated with you. YES!!! #forgivenessIsFreedom
I’ve got your blog on my gps 😉
Your always welcome love ❤️
Aww.. YOU THE BEST! Have yourself a blessed weekend sweetheart!❤️
😊😊 and YOU ARE THE GREATEST
Have a lovely weekend love ❤️
This is wonderful poetry dear Poet. Needed and amazing words shared.
Glad this piece resonated with you.. Thank you so much!❤
You are welcome dear Poet.