Dejected and blue, With fragmentized dignity, She barely exists!
This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
Day 12 word prompt is “TORTURED!”
Suggested Form – Senryu.
PS – Apologies for being MIA! When life happens, there is not much that you can do, other than prioritizing the important stuff!
On a positive note, I was successfully able to tackle and embrace life and NOW I’m back – to churn out some creativity!
Love,
48 Comments
Prompt very well used.
Thanks love!❤
yes sometimes people can go invisible right in front of your very eyes
How true and sad! 🙁
I know how bad it aches.
It like a f*** earth quake.
Then sometime later
i re-awake.
And resolve to quit being friends
and stop blowing my love
on some young man
then you came along
older wiser with a santa’s beard
kind hearted and lively
you really know how to work cherry
and i feel like a million bucks
you alone get all of my ****s
I’m going all in on a heartbreak.
cuz Santa I am in love with you
Whoa! This is absolutely so real and relatable!
Such few words that truly speak volumes into the plunging depths of a broken heart. So beautifull penned Richa!🤗❤️
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
You’re very welcome 😊 ❤️
Few words but they describe that feeling with such precision.. ……👏
Brilliant
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
My pleasure 😊
Beautifully penned!! ❤️
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
So sad ..”barely exists” is so impactful here. Lovely as always !
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Yes, I agree! It’s the SADDEST thing to happen to somebody..
Always worth the wait! Nicely done!
Thank you so much!❤
You’re welcome!😊
Welcome back and this is so well said!
Thank you so much!❤
You are welcome Richa. 💕
What a soulful capture of a heartbreak,
and the imagery is so powerful ❤️
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
Always a pleasure love ❤️❤️
Well written !!
Thank you so much!❤
Nice brevity justifying the prompt, great share 💐
Thanks much! 🙂
My pleasure 🌻
Wonderfully poignant, loved the pic
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Wonderful use of the prompt. The poem really described it. ❤️
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
You’re welcome, dear! ❤️
This is brilliant…
Very well penned 👍
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What a heartfelt read
Ah.. Ironies of life! 😉
Thank you so much for stopping by!❤
True my friend. My pleasure ❤️
Short but beautiful. Well done!
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Thanks!
Sure, will do..
I’m waiting.
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That’s fantastic to hear. Looking forward to you being back. 🙏🏼😘