Breaking doors, looting riches; they were the infamous "partners" in crime, Notorious for evading arrests; many establishments did they burglarize, For 10 years they snaked perspicaciously; their heists were the talk of the town; Until one fine day, Judas was caught and the 2-person gang was brought down. People wondered, deputies speculated - how did the tables turn around? Did someone snitch or was it Matthew who two-timed!
This post is in response to In Other Words by Patricia’s Place – where we write a story or poem of 5 lines or less using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about the prompts, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
This weeks prompt is “PARTNERS!”
PS – The inspiration of this post comes from – The Gospel of Matthew 26:15. The only difference?? It was Judas who was played this time!
Love,
34 Comments
Nicely told story in the poem!
Glad you like it.. Thank you so much!❤️
Fun story in 5 sentences. I like the image you chose to go along with it.
Appreciate your kind words.. Thank you!❤️
Enjoyed this, Richa. You have to watch out for those back stabbers! 🙂
Thank you so much, appreciate it! ❤️
Yes, too many serpents around! 😉
What a brilliant take ❤️
Thank you so much S, appreciate it! ❤️
My absolute pleasure
I want to know who was the snitch 😀
Hahaha.. Don’t we all?? 😉 😛
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Back stabbers are worse than the enemies we already know😕
I love these micropoetries of yours❤
Yes Yasmin.. Specially in today’s time, when there isn’t any dearth of them! 🙁
Aww.. Thanks sweetheart!❤️
Intriguing! You’re really good with these. I miss your tales. ❤️
Aww.. Thanks Winnie!❤️❤️
I’m slowly and gradually trying to work my way through them! Life’s been really caught up this side..
My pleasure, dear! ❤️ I can feel you. Same here.
Ikr! Sometimes, this all takes a toll on personal time/life specially when you have so many things going on in the background!🥴🥴
Here’s to hoping that things get better soon!
I can definitely relate especially when others are begging for your attention. Yes! Cheers to that, dear! 🥂❤️
Cheers love!🥂
Once again you made something interesting out of nothing!
Really appreciate you taking out the time to read.. Thank you so so much!❤️
Looting Richa, your infamous partners; that’s a crime, how could he steal your heart? You must arrest his heart, with your love. But nevertheless, he’s notorious; evading your gaze, capture him with your presence! #Huz! Lovely, you inspired! 😊
Wow.. This is a brilliant take on what I’ve written! Wonderful thinking Warren!👏👏
It never shuts off 😔😊 Always a pleasure my friend! Blessings!
That’s what makes you special!😇😇
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Wonderful story! You are an amazing story teller.
Aww.. You made my day! Thank you so much!❤️
Hmm looks fishy… someone must have snitched 🕵
Intriguing tale Richa ❤️
Hahahaha.. Someone sure did! 😉
Thanks love!❤
You’re welcome love ❤️❤️
Great way to end a story, with a question. Leaves the possibility of another chapter. Thanks for sharing your lines.
Thank you so much.. I’m glad that you liked it!❤️