Savage Rapture – In Other Words

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Swirling and twirling to the
rhythm of your savage rapture,

Painstakingly "dancing" my heart out,

I attempt to sway this distress away.

Loving you is like
an eternal psychedelic experience,

Forever in your afterglow I parch!

This post is in response to In Other Words by Patricia’s Place – where we write a story or poem of 5 lines or less using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about the prompts, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!

This weeks prompt is “DANCING!”

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    1. I’d witnessed one such show on our vacation at Pensacola Beach – Super trippy and exhilarating! 😉

      Thank you so much Jenna.. I hope you are feeling better now? ❤

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