I have wandered through sadness, lost hope and failed, Allied with despair and befriended hate. With dark clouds, gloomy skies and hopelessness to my release, I have cried a million tears of disbelief. Walking habitually through the boulevards of broken dreams, I have been mislaid, my faith did dim. Shambled, broken and incurably dejected, Full of remorse, my life has always been misguided and defeated. My existence has been cruel, I have paid the price, The smile that you see today is just another petty disguise!
This post is written in response to FOWC with Fandango – where you write a post using a prompt word. It can be prose, poetry, fiction, non-fiction and can be of any length. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
Today’s prompt is “REMORSE!”
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Excellent. Thanks for participating in the prompt.
Thank you so much for “successfully” replacing “Daily Prompts!” I’m glad I could be a part of this movement!❤️
Wow, awesome job. Not sure if it’s a true telling of how your feeling or just a great way to describe the feeling. Tells a story of hurt left for your own perspective.
Thank you so much. I guess, we’ve all been through dark times in our lives.
Indeed, well done once again. Have a great weekend.
Thank you so much.. Wish you the same!❤️
Really good. It’s sort of my mind set, certainly this morning
Ah, such is life! 😉
Glad you like it!❤️
Beautiful.
I love this.
❤ from someone who has been up and down that boulevard of broken dreams many times himself.
Guess, we’ve all had our share of broken dreams!❤️
Thank you for stopping by!
Beyond beautiful. ❤️❤️
Thank you so much!❤️
You are so very welcome
Excellent! Especially loved the ending
‘I have paid the price,
The smile that you see today is just another petty disguise!’
Thanks a bunch sweetheart!❤️
My absolute pleasure ❤️
This is an excellent write!! 🙂
Thank you so much!❤️
You are so welcome!! 🙂
Heartfelt. Gorgeous writing from a beautiful lady
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤️
my pleasure!
Nice!
Thank you so much sweetie!❤️
You’re welcome!
Such a beautiful post. I’m glad you’re back Richa! ❣💙
Aww.. Thank you so much sweetie!❤️
Really excellent Richa👍
Thank you so much!❤️
Beautiful 💜💜💜
Thank you so much!❤️
Great take on the prompt. Profoundly beautiful, dear! ❤️
Thank you so much sweetie!❤️
My pleasure, dear! ❤️
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Amazing ……👌
Thanks a bunch sweetie!❤️
My pleasure 😊❤️
This makes me want to give you a hug. Well done, Richa!
Thank you so much!❤️
wow simply fantastic, the last line nails it! Loved it.
Glad you like it.. Thank you so much!🙏
Such an eloquent piece! Thought about Green Day’s song “Boulevard of Broken Dreams” when I saw that stanza.
Thanks love! Ah, how songs inspire!❤
Beautifully written. Life’s ups and downs, keeps us on our toes.
You bet! 😉
Thank you so much for reading!❤
My pleasure. 🙂
So beautifully sad. Love it!
Thank you so much!❤
Amazing Richa 👌
Thank you so much!❤
Great take over the prompt Remorse! Bravo ✌️ Brilliant poem🌿
Thank you so much!😊
Most welcome 🎄
Such heartbreaking imagery! Love it my sweet friend. Wishing you a very happy New year!
Thank you so much sweetie! Wish you and yours a blessed 2019!❤️
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Shivers, wow this is hauntingly beautiful.
I reckon each of us has a tale or two on the ups and downs of life.
Yes, we all do!❤️❤️
PS – Welcome back!🤗🤗🤗
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Lovely piece and beautiful take on the prompt. Thank you for following ThusNSuch. 🙂
I am so grateful when you tap me on my shoulder and smile hello. Then I arrive at you doorstep and look what I find … such lovely writing! 💜❤️
Aww.. How kind!!! Thank you so much!❤️