Invisible Lover – In Other Words

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Desiring your consideration,
I have cried a million tears.

"Invisible" to your complacency,
I have died a million deaths.

Inconspicuous indulgence!

Your nearsightedness annihilates me, 
I can no longer take this any more.

I wonder how can you be so unseeing
 and my love be so obscure?

This post is in response to In Other Words by Patricia’s Place – where we write a story or poem of 5 lines or less using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about the prompts, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!

This weeks prompt is “INVISIBLE!”

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76 Comments

    1. Yes you are so right, sometimes you just have to learn your lessons and take the next step.

      Thank you so much for stopping by!❤️

  1. You write beautifully and I really do mean that, a great warmth shines through and lol how an earth do you manage to use so many descriptive words in one short poem? If I attempted this it’ll finish at 500!!

  2. This types of relationships teaches us how important we are to ourselves. It hurts the first and maybe second go around but we figure out what to value eventually. This was beautifully written, Ericha!

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