Desiring your consideration, I have cried a million tears. "Invisible" to your complacency, I have died a million deaths. Inconspicuous indulgence! Your nearsightedness annihilates me, I can no longer take this any more. I wonder how can you be so unseeing and my love be so obscure?
This post is in response to In Other Words by Patricia’s Place – where we write a story or poem of 5 lines or less using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about the prompts, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
This weeks prompt is “INVISIBLE!”
Love,
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Such depth to your words. We oft’t times deplete ourselves in an attempt to garner someone’s favour. Eventually, we have to move on. I get this.
Yes you are so right, sometimes you just have to learn your lessons and take the next step.
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Absolutely.
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Nice💖
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Been raining cold here since yesterday!
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Something to comprehend Richa !!
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You are very welcome ! smiles coming your way with love my friend
Excellent poem! And the question at the end….
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It’s a question we often ask ourselves, but a little too late..
You are right, my dear.
You write beautifully and I really do mean that, a great warmth shines through and lol how an earth do you manage to use so many descriptive words in one short poem? If I attempted this it’ll finish at 500!!
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Nice one!
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This is just just beautiful Richa !!
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Pleasure always Richa for ur work !!
Thats a very painful emotional and you’ve written it wonderfully well
Thank you so much sweetie! Pain makes you a little wiser.. ❤️
This is brilliant….. bravo 👏👏 👏
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My pleasure 😊
This one really got me thinking. Love it! Congrats. 💕💕
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You know who you’re talking to right? 😛I wouldn’t miss a post (unless it was a total fluke accident)💕💕
Hahaha.. I know, I know! 😉
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You make it easy! 😘
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Bravo
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Deeply emotional one….you are really good at giving out such unique take on the prompts Richa ❤️
Thank you so much Radhika.. I so appreciate you taking out the time to read and comment!❤️
Good one Richa👍
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Great words, dear! ❤️
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Poignantly beautiful and O so relatable 💔
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Beautifully penned Richa 🙂
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Pleasure Richa 🙂
Brilliant and beautiful 💗
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beautiful !
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Beautiful poetry…👌 Happy Shivratri Richa…God bless you🙏
Thank you so much! Happy Shivratri to you too!🙏
Yes, such an obvious thing but still so blind, you tell this so well.
Yes, sometimes the hearts refuses to see the truth.. Thank you so so much!❤️
My pleasure
what a beautiful poem – you highlighted the frustration so vividly
Been there, done that! 😉
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I know and you put it beautiful ❤️
Nice one
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Amazing!!👍
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Very deep , you put in words so beautifully 💝
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True, a brilliant write!! 🙂
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This types of relationships teaches us how important we are to ourselves. It hurts the first and maybe second go around but we figure out what to value eventually. This was beautifully written, Ericha!
You are so right!
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