Once upon a time there was a girl, Who believed in the transcendental power of love. Counting upon the million mystical galaxies every night, Fanciful fantasies of yearning she wove. Presuming the world to be her safe haven, She embraced and hailed all women and men. Selflessly loving all with a heart so pure, She was in its true sense a fervent Zen. Expecting reciprocation of her feelings, She looked upon every single one with equal fairness. With a soul so beautifully sanctimonious, She was an unmistakable epitome of sunny brightness. Spreading jubilation and laughter everywhere she yode, Her "happy ever after" she did foresee. Consigning to oblivion, unsighted, She forgot, this is all just a figment of her imaginary. This world is no dewy-eyed fairy-tale, And she was not some Cinderella, not even an enchantress. The human race is not what she thinks to be, It is but a congregation of dejection, resentment and bitterness. Melancholy, with a feeble heart she now survives, Baring her beaten soul for everyone to see, Waking up to the brusque reality of life, That girl is you, that girl is me!
This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
Day 18 word prompt is “ONCE UPON A TIME!”
Suggested Form – Fable.
As always any feedback and advise is more than appreciated!
Love,
48 Comments
My heart wails. You need to write a version where she does meet the fairy tale start.
Thoughts apart beautiful penned ❤️❤️
Here’s to hoping that she does! 😉
Thank you so much!❤
❤️❤️hope she does
Yes she needs to… Bcoz miracles too happen only in dis world n she shud have a share of dem
Here’s to hoping that she does.. Coz yes, you are so right! Life is a miracle in itself! ❤
The bitter reality of life.. expressed beautifully!!❤️
Indeed Kranti! #bitterTruth
Thank you so much for stopping by!❤
My pleasure always! ❤️
So true! Such is life. Captured evocatively.
Ah, such is life!
Thank you so much for stopping by!❤
You are welcome dear. 💕
Searching mind for HUGE word to use in comment space. Forget that!
Heart speaks… ❤
Haha.. Thank you so much!❤
Absolutely beautiful as always! Thank you so much for sharing!!
Glad you liked t.. Thank you so much!❤
You are very welcome, but I should be the one thanking you! Your poems are absolutely amazing!
Aww.. You are way too kind! Have yourself a blessed week!❤
OMG! This clears so much up. I never knew it was me! 💕🥀👸🏻😳👌🏼🤷🏽♀️🌻🤖😂😘
PS Beautifully written!
Thank you so much!
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Lovely!!
Thank you so much!❤
Very evocative and beautiful! It reminds me of a saying… ” can you imagine Snow White going to grad school ?”
Glad you like it.. Thank you so much!❤
Your words are truly captivating. ❤️ So very true. Reality bites. 😉
Thank you so much sweetie!❤
You’re welcome, dear! ❤️
So very true of the world we live in…sadly!
Sadly, yes!
Thank you so much!❤
Amazing 😍 that girl is you that girl is me
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
Awesome !!
Thank you so much!❤
OMG, a truly amazing poem! 🙂 ❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thank you so much!❤
You’re very welcome Richa! ❤️
I hope you’re having a wonderful weekend!🤗
So far so good Jenna! 😉
The weather has been a blessing.. As always, lazing around, making the most of the “cold front” with my blankie and hot cocoa! 😉
Hope you too are having fun?
Haha I’m looking forward to the cold front we’re supposed to get next week.😊😉
Haha.. Wish you all the luck!😘😘
Thank you!😁😘
Nice share
Thank you so much! 🙂
My pleasure always!
“That girl is you, that girl is me.” Absolutely amazing post Richa. I loved every word of it.
Aww.. Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
This world is no dewy-eyed fairy-tale” you can say that again
That girl is all of us.
Now why does this world work the other way around… such a graceful start to the believe of pure goodness and love in mankind only to dejected like so #sounfair.
I hope she finds a much better ending in the future 🙂
“Why, then, did I always feel as if his happiness was my responsibility? It wasn’t fair for him to burden me with that. It had never been fair.”
― Melanie Benjamin, Alice I Have Been
#unfairForSure
Beautiful! 💖
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤