Obscuring my view, Like firm "footsteps of the mind", Your words trample me. This path I can hike no more, With blistered trust, I elude!
This post is written in response to Tuesday writing Prompt Challenge by GO DOG GO CAFÉ. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
Today’s prompt – Use the phrase “footsteps of the mind” in a poem. What else could I write if not a TANKA!
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A perfect entry!
Phew! Thank you so much!🙏
that’s awesome! really great use of the prompt!
Thank you so much.. Glad you like it!🙏
Amazing !
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It’s wonderful 🙂
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You are most welcome <3
Goodness! Another work of heart art <3
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Dats lovely done Richa ❤️
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Pleasure always 😊
Wow that was wonderful!
Thank you so much.. Glad you like it!🙏
Fantastic!!
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Fabulous!
And kind of feisty- love it!♡
Thank you so much hotness.. Glad you like it!🙏
Sometimes people don’t even realize how powerful their words are… and sometimes they know it very well!
This is so spot on Aixa.. Well said and so true!
Thank you so much for stopping by!🙏
PS – I have left a comment on your latest blog post.. Seems like I’m in the spam list of yours! 😉
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You do good prompt
Glad that you think so.. Thank you so much!🙏
Oh, this was amazing!
Thank you so much sweetheart!🙏
Amazing use of the prompt! You are awesome, dear! ❤️
And you are way too kind with your compliments! Thank you so much Winnie dear!🙏
Strong and beautiful Richa 🙂
Thank you so much Radhika dear!🙏
TANKA very much…for your inspiring effort! Tanka is your cup of tea—literally! <3
Haha.. You are too kind! Thank you so much!🙏
PUNNERY…AND POETRY—IS MY THING! 🙂
Those are the best things to have!😀😀
Brilliant 👏👏👏
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Splendid ! ❤️
Thank you so much for your kindness!🙏
You are welcome, Richa. 😊
Loved your take -❤️
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😊🌸my pleasure ❤️
Blistered trust oh wow what a vivid description,
This piece is pure genius ❤️
Glad you like it sweetheart! Thank you!❤️❤️