Swirling and twirling to the rhythm of your savage rapture, Painstakingly "dancing" my heart out, I attempt to sway this distress away. Loving you is like an eternal psychedelic experience, Forever in your afterglow I parch!
This post is in response to In Other Words by Patricia’s Place – where we write a story or poem of 5 lines or less using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about the prompts, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
This weeks prompt is “DANCING!”
Love,
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Savage, that love.
Lovely.
Thank you so much!❤
Always a pleasure.
That awesome
Thank you!😊
Sure, I like this!! 🙂
Aww.. Thank you so much!❤️
You are very welcome!! 🙂
Lovely!
Thank you so much!❤️
The last line is fantastic. And the photo go with it. Wow.
Glad you liked it.. Thank you so much!❤️
You’re welcome. Here’s mine
https://3psbyseeker.wordpress.com/2019/01/18/it-has-been-a-long-week/
Loved it! 🙂
wonderfully sensual!
Thank you so much.. Appreciate you stopping by! 🙂
That’s really awesome !
Thanks sweetie!❤️
Sighing from your lovely words, dear! I love it! 😊❤️
Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
My pleasure! 😊❤️
Oh I love the last line
Thank you so much!❤
My pleasure
Excellent, loved it Richa ❤️❤️
Thanks sweetheart!❤
Loving you is like an eternal psychedelic experience ❤👌👌👌
Thanks love!❤❤
Loved this❤ beautifully penned
Thank you so much!❤
Beautiful ❤️
Thank you so much!❤
Most welcome,Have a good day ☕
What a beautiful expression
Thank you so much!❤
My absolute pleasure
You have an excellent creative skill
Aww.. This means a lot!!!! Thank you so much!❤
Most welcome 💜
So passionate, wonderful.
Thank you so much!❤
Pleasure
Lovely poem Richa, that picture looks like it would be quite the show too! 🙂 ❤
I’d witnessed one such show on our vacation at Pensacola Beach – Super trippy and exhilarating! 😉
Thank you so much Jenna.. I hope you are feeling better now? ❤
Sounds like a wonderful experience! 🙂
Yes, much better, thank you Richa! 🙂 ❤❤
That’s wonderful!❤❤
🤗❤️
lovely
Thank you so much!❤
your very welcome
Perfect words for the image
Thank you so much!❤
On my! Sounds heavy. Your lines are great thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much! Appreciate you stopping by!😊
I’m not sure what emotion I feel when I think of those lines, but it definitely sounds menacing.
Hahaha.. #troubleMakerInMaking ✌✌
Beautifully penned 🤗
Thank you so much Pam!❤️
You’re welcome 💙
I’m completely mesmerised by this beautiful write❤️