Losing my insights, Enchanted by your embrace, Hasty time stands still! Absorbed twinklings of desire, Freeing me of consciousness.
This post is written in response to OctPoWriMo Challenge – where you’ll write a “POEM” everyday for 31 days, using the prompt word. Follow this link to learn more about it, see other submissions, and to share your own. Come and join in the fun folks!
Day 20 word prompt is “TIME STANDS STILL!”
As always any feedback and advise is more than appreciated!
Love,
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Great take on the prompt! Love makes time stand still. 💕
Most certainly it does! 🙂
Thank you so much for stopping by, appreciate it a lot!❤
You are welcome dear. 💕
Desire certainly can “free” one of consciousness!
YES, you bet! 😉
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Oh what a beautiful moment that is…..💖
Ain’t it! 😉
Thank you so much for stopping by Radhika, appreciate it a lot!❤
I love this – the idea of love standing still when in love.
*I love this – the idea of time standing still when in love.
Won’t that be just great! 😉
Thank you so much!❤
I think so 😉
I’d love to live in that moment, living all things behind. #AGirlCanDream 😊
You are such an amazing writer wow 💐
Btw do ya know any store I can buy that particular watch from… asking for a friend 😉
Aww.. Thank you so much sweetheart.. Means a lot!❤
Hahaha.. Looks like that store exists beyond galaxies! 😉 😛
You’re welcome love ❤️
Well then I guess it’s time I start practicing my teleporting skills 😉
Hahaha 😉 😛
I adored the twinklings of desire!
Glad you did! 😉
Thank you so much!❤
Beautiful
Thank you so much!❤
How beautiful. Just loved the flow of words ❤️
Thank you so much, appreciate it a lot!❤
My pleasure always
You have a gift Richa, poem gift. I love this poem
This means a lot Ben! Thank you so much!❤
Beautiful poem as always, but, can you take out the picture of me on the top?
LOL 😃😃😃
Beautiful poem!! ❤️
Thank you so much!❤
Simply beautiful!! ❤️
Aww.. Thank you so much sweetie!❤
😊❤️
Wow beautiful
Thank you so much! 🙂
Splendid is the last verse. 💓
Thank you so much!❤
You said so much in so little! 🥀😍💕
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Great take on the prompt, dear! Totally agree with you that love is like a stopwatch. 😉❤️
Aww.. Thank you so much sweetheart!❤
Yes.. A stopwatch that’s difficult to buy! 😉
Time stands still! Lovely!
Thank you so much!❤
Brilliant
Thanks doll!❤
PS – I’m really glad that you could take out some time to read my crazy stuff! 😉
Much love my Friend………the pleasure was all mine 😊❤️
Beautiful brevity! Lovely
Thanks much! 🙂
You’re welcome! have a great day ☕
My pleasure always! Have a great Halloween week 🎃
Thank you! You too!🎃
O, the imagery. Absolutely wonderful
Aww.. Thanks a bunch sweetheart! You always say the kindest of things!❤️
I mean every word I say ❤🤗
This gave me goosebumps, knowing the sweetness of loves magical abilities to make time stand still.😊❤️
Aww.. I’m so glad this piece resonated with you Jenna.. Thank you so much!❤
Yes definitely, you’re very welcome Richa!😊 ❤️